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May and Dawn's Magical Experience

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May and Dawn's Magical Experience
        May and Dawn had been traveling around together, entering contests and training their pokemon. During their travels, they came across a small town. Dawn noticed a poster advertising for a magic show.
        "C'mon May, let's go. It'll be fun." Said Dawn.
        "Alright. We'll in for a little bit." Replied May.
They found the tent with relative ease. They entered and found a table near the front. The Magician then appeared on stage in a puff of smoke. She started doing her routine which consisted of making a Buneary appear out of her hat and making objects float.
For her finale, she asked for volunteers. Dawn raised both her and May's hands. They both go chosen and went on stage. She then pulled out a small coin on a string.
"Now I want you both the focus on my coin." She said. Then the coin started swinging back and forth. "Focus all your attention on the coin. Look nowhere else. Nothing else matters." As she said all this, both girls started to go slack and their eyes had a dazed look in them. "Now when I snap my fingers, you will be completely hypnotized."
*Snap*
Both girls then stood rigid, no expression at all on their faces. "Now tell me your names." She said.
"My name is May." Said May, completely monotone.
"I'm Dawn." Said Dawn, also monotone.
"Good, now Dawn I want you to stand on this chair, and act like a pidgeon." The magician commanded.
Dawn got onto the chair, squatted down, and started flapping her arms as if they were wings, all while saying "coo coo".
"May, I want you to act like a chicken." She said.
May hunched over and put her hands on her hips. She started flapping her elbows and started clucking like a chicken.
All while this was going on, the crowd was laughing hysterically
After the show May and Dawn left, having no memory of what happened. The magician was counting her revenue, thinking to herself that she should do this again sometime. Maybe to a certain red-headed gymleader.
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hamn8r's avatar
this isn't original.